Black Poetry : I Think I...Nevermind...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by LovelyGoldenOne, Jun 25, 2003.

  1. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    another song... :D


    verse 1

    for the past few days
    i've been holdin inside
    this feelin' that i have
    can't even look you in the eyes
    baby i don't ever want you to go
    but it seems to me
    that your love is gone


    chorus

    i think i love you more
    i think i care for you more
    feels like you've closed your hearts door
    and you won't let me in
    i think i love you more
    than you love me
    nevermind i know that i love you more


    verse 2

    let me just explain
    how i thought of all this
    everything you used to do to me
    now its all a wish
    emotions over you
    cryin' 'til i'm through
    boy i just want you to stay with me


    hook

    how do i keep this feelin' inside?
    how do i know that this ain't true love?
    could i be so, so, so, so, wrong?
    boy i can't imagine my life without you...


    (back to chorus)
     
  2. skrybe7

    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    girl you got some tyte flows fo' sho.
    your man is lucky indeed.
    Peace
     
  3. Alizentang

    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    skrybe hit it on the head. Your man is lucky! Everything I have read of yours I can feel completely. Keep on babygirl!
     
  4. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    man... i just wanna hear u sing these songs, cuz they be soundin like hits!! tyte...
     
  5. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i wanna hear you sing em too....cuz the way you do this is so fly!
     
  6. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    hottest CD on da chart
    tyme to drop it ...........very nice sis.
     
  7. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awwwwwwwwwwwww thanks alot skrybe:)

    thanks so much alizentang!
     
  8. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i wish ya'll could here them poetically and swtt...... :(


    thanks alot rich!
     
  9. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I can truly see this being recorded, great write!
     
  10. aqueenpassing

    aqueenpassing Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "Nice Flow"

    Would love to hear it to music.... Keep expressing yourself

    AqueenPassing
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