Black Poetry : I Think I Love Her

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by LURK, Jul 28, 2006.

  1. LURK

    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Look at her,do you see the glow that surrounds her?
    Behind her 'tude, i dont think you do...

    It dont matter,cause look at all the fellas around her
    they're tryin to get a piece of her too...

    she has great features,nice lips and thick hips
    i lose breath when she shoots me a look...

    i get knee deeper, in her glow and her flow
    tryin' to read her thru her eyes like a book...

    we spoke a few times-shared a few lines
    and a few smiles
    we laughed whenever their was awkward pauses...

    i want to get closer,she wants to get closer I think...
    at least thats how it seemed
    after a few drinks but of course its.....

    in the aire, yea we flirted,shes worth it....
    been with alotta nice women,but shes perfect...

    she met Tony...she didnt meet Lurk....
    Lurk was off that week...
    she met the man behind the words that moved audiences...

    most know me, they know i how i work
    and how i get sweet
    But with her i was completely took,fallin' in bliss...

    i mean ,c'mon...

    ..Look at her !!,do you see the glow that surrounds her?
    Behind her 'tude, i dont think you do...

    It dont matter,cause look at all the fellas around her
    they're tryin to get a piece of her too...

    but i want her, i could see us maintaining relations
    love makin for dayz and, us takin vacations
    on trips to heaven....

    yea ,we could go on trips to heaven,im growin impatient...
    shes just so hot and sweet like summer...

    well,
    I...

    I....

    I think I Love Her.............:donttell: :luvv:


























     
  2. DesiredEpiphany

    DesiredEpiphany New Member MEMBER

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    SNAPS

    That was great......Does she know? *smile*
     
  3. sweet apple*pie

    sweet apple*pie Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That was wonderful.
     
  4. Aaliyahmonet

    Aaliyahmonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice:)

    Very nice piece Lurk, and romantic too. Keep doing ya thang and god bless.

    Much Love


    AM
     
  5. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yep i think u do too , what ya waiting on go get her
    this was mad awesome and tyte
     
  6. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Brotha Lurk:
    Reallyn feeln' this flo.
    Make sure she knows.
    You dont want her to get away.:)


    Much Luv
     
  7. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow i think i love you. wow this was such a treat coming from you. honey you was like a bowl of icecream. very good!!!!!!!! come check your sis out if you like at myspacenevar112 if you like.
     
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