Black Poetry : I think I betta let him go! I'm Baaaaaaaaack!!!!

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Nita, Feb 7, 2004.

  1. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I think I betta let him go

    See...met him back in ' 94
    If I knew how he'd turn then
    Id'a kicked him in his chin
    I wasn't really feelin ya,
    I said why not?
    See I don't do drugs
    that day I musta smoked pot :yo:

    1 year turned to 2,..next thing I know we @ 7
    we got hitched, had three kids
    I was living in heaven
    But oh after the 7th soon came the 8th
    You started drinking that Booze :toast:
    and stayin out late

    Home Alone, that's how I was :(
    Me, Myself, and My kids
    It still hurts today that wicked crap that you did :cry:

    knew you were getting drunk :toast:
    Maybe had a new girl :martian:
    found that to be true,
    it crushed my whole world

    I tried to figure out what I did wrong :bawling:
    I go to work :geek:
    she stays home :sleep:
    I go to school :teach:
    she stays home :sleep:
    I go to church :angel1:
    she stays home :sleep: (I've heard of homemaker but Dang)

    You know what else wrong? :nono:
    She's got fiftyleven kids :jawdrop:
    and he wont take care his own

    does she look better than me?

    brother broke it down one day
    He said the B**** looks like
    she be chuggin hay...................lol

    It made me feel better but still I hurt :flame:
    He left at home beautiful treasures
    for a trunk full of dirt :confused:

    I have no respect for her,
    she helped to fail my marriage
    What she should have been doing
    is pulling somebody's carriage

    Yeah I want to hurt her
    as well as my man yo
    even thought about hiring Tony Soprano....( No body no crime...lol)

    But I'm better than that
    See GOD made me strong
    for me he had prepared something great All along :D

    I have learned not to hate
    and I learned to forgive
    they will stand before GOD
    and an account they will give
    I know it wasn't worth it
    but I will keep doing well
    GOD's been too good to me
    to risk going to hell.... :devil:
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow, you finished this up with a bang, so I'm creating a different response...Still emotively written, and I love your use of smilies. Yes, they will get theirs in time. Use that anger to create something positive for you.
     
  3. Alpha Male

    Alpha Male Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Listen to Alpha Male Nita!




    Alpha Male speaks about your Poem and states "it was a delight!"
    The storry line also called the plot was out of sight
    Hope this didnt happen to you
    and your presently not blue
    Keep informing others about good females plight!!!!!!!!
     
  4. Akilah

    Akilah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey welcome back !!! :wave:
    Very nice scribing
    Enjoyed it a lot ....

    Much Peace,
    Akilah :spinstar:
     
  5. Khasm13

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    [email protected] kids :lol:
    this is tyte as all heck...

    sometimes catz don't know a good thing when they got it...
    one love
    khasm
     
  6. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thankz guys

    Thanks watzinaname,Alpha Male, Khasm...lol and Akilah
    Thank you for checkin me out, your support means alot
    I'm gald you liked it.
    Yeah, this really is happening to me, and yes Khasm I said fiftyleven...lol That's a southern numeral...lol
    Peace and much love :heart:
     
  7. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sister nita nice scribe...
    the emotion is felted here
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
  8. MsBashay

    MsBashay New Member MEMBER

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    really feeling this one. I've been through trail and tribulations with me ex some time ago. but now my mind has been set free. keep it coming.

    BLESSINGS INTINUALLY UNTO U AND YOUR FIFTELEVEN KIDS.
    JAH DIVA
     
  9. j'hiah

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    she don't have fiftyleven kids :lol:

    Nita, you are still crazy and l still have madd love for you

    blessings and peace to you and yours..
    jh.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow i missed dis one and it was wooooweeeee!!
    tyte flowing u scribe dis so smoothly flow on
     
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