Black Poetry : I Think I’ll Call It Love

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  1. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I shall dig deeply within myself
    so you might fathom the depths
    of how I feel for you with all that
    I am; although what I feel is so
    often misinterpreted by many

    Compelling myself to concentrate
    on the realness of you only fortifies
    my soul to reach the zenith of our
    shared and personal ecstasy

    I will then allow myself to hold you
    in my thoughts and cradle your
    persuasive manner

    My mind’s destiny sways and my
    yearn to have you in my heart
    forever grows

    I become one with the heavens
    and the stars when I think of how
    your gentleness mystifies me
    on that "extra tight" level

    I cry when I marvel at the age-old
    raw pain that hurts me so good

    It is a throbbing from within that’s
    welcomed with open arms…

    It is a pleasured pain that I truly
    desire to never get enough of…

    Meditating on days past and nights
    present, the complexity of you, my
    pain, is sometimes soothed by the
    tears I shed in subconscious calm

    As my tear-soaked cheeks become
    dry with comfortable imaginings of
    you, my soul then rushes; filled with
    the necessity of belonging beyond
    mere passionate expressions

    The warmth I feel for you is returned
    within me with just a simple touch;
    I am then held closer than I’ve ever
    been held before

    And I like this feeling…

    I think I’ll call it
    LOVE

    © GQING2K2
     
  2. Derrick Jay

    Derrick Jay Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ...and spell it with big letters!
    you know i'm feelin this...nice!

    One,
    Derrick Jay
     
  3. Rashad

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    Yeah! Yeah!

    I believe u could call it that!
    :D
    Tyte scribe GQ!
    I dig Much Poet!!
    :toast:
     
  4. brotherman

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    Stay clear of my Woman!!!!! You slick tounged gigolo you...hell, I would call it love too. Tight imaginings.
     
  5. shaz

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    dis is your story bro call it what you want.
    This is a very intriguing piece that carefully identifies the symptoms of that virus we sometimes call love.
    loved it
     
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    playa
    feeling the flava
    mac'd out

    dssNY
     
  7. patrice

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    aaaahhhh, how sweet...this is a beautiful piece gq.
     
  8. GA_Sunshyne

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    BigHead.


    ...call it whateva you wanna!! dayum!!! :D

    this is one of those pieces that's just... "like that"
    & what i mean by that is... it takes you "there"
    to that place where all you can do is wish it was
    written about&for you... (dats RT)

    :heart:
    Elayne.
     
  9. MOCHAMADNEZZ

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    hey

    just wanted to stop by and let you know i m feeling your piece..
     
  10. alyce

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    call it love, hate, good, bad...whatsuneva... the feel-good affect on your lady will render all "labels" null and void.... you get my meaning...hehehe

    tight as always,

    alyce
     
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