Black Poetry : I The Women The Child Inside

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  1. ASHANTA

    ASHANTA Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I THE WOMEN THE LITTLE GIRL WITHIN
    By Jacqueline Amos

    I the women, the shell of the child,
    I the love, the angel inside,
    I the laughter, when they are tears,
    I thy playground, for great love.
    I thy humble and the flow of tears,
    Thy laughter reveals, thy sacred place.

    Love me tender, if not I shall starve.
    Nevertheless I shall be yours.
    Holding my pillow tight,
    Waiting to be tucked in at night,
    Daddy brings great love.
    Sharing my candy through out the night.
    Crying out to be touched.

    Illusions of a great love,
    Fantasies that I dream,
    Sweet candy of sweetish turf,
    Hold me tight lonely cries out,
    Rub my back, so I shall sleep,
    Hold my hand, fears at my door,
    Give me toys, that I shall discover great love.

    Claiming up into a fetal form,
    Holding on for great warmth,
    Tears that flow upon my pillow tight,
    Mother where are you? I need you now.
    Sweet whispers silently I sleep,
    Warm body that protects me, as I sleep.

    Make up for the party to come,
    Pretty dresses lying about,
    make believe friends,
    where are you when I call?

    Friends surrounding me,
    Dancing and laughing all at one time.
    Singing sweet lullaby’s as he strokes me tender,
    the fears go away, hold me tight says the little girl,
    inside, don’t let go,
    I love you my favorite knight,
    don’t leave me as she cries,
    I don’t want to be lonely, I give you my toy.
    The little girl cries out for love.
    Copywriter 2002
    I thy women, the shell of the child, I thy love, the angel inside, I thy laughter, when there are tears, I thy playground, for great love. I thy humble and the flow of tears, Thy laughter reveals, thy sacred place.

    :love:
     
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    so heart warming and loveable
    u make me melt with such beautiful flow
    i loved this one ......Thanks for sharing
     
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    ASHANTA Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You are welcome my king.
     
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    That was excellent do you have any more posted:)
     
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    ASHANTA Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes my sister Cindy you are so right we the black women have so much love. The inner depths of our soul cry out, when we are alone. We must let our brothers know that the beauty within is the jewels to all there dreams.

    Yes Dupe http://www.authorsden.com/jacquelineamos are just put in any search engine who is jacqueline amos noumi arts productions.

    Thank you
     
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    beautiful my Sista
     
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    ASHANTA Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you blackwizdom such a powerful name.
     
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    blackwizdom Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    beautiful my Sista
     
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    lovely indeed
    your way with wordz are truely masterful
    i can see that you have a lot of love in your heart
    go head my sis

    peace
    khasm
     
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    Khasm love makes the world go round, yes I do as I, as you my brother, But we must always remeber never cast our jewels to the swine.
     
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