Black Poetry : I thank you

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  1. brown_N_sassy06

    brown_N_sassy06 Member MEMBER

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    I've been unsure about a lot of things in my life
    But one thing I can be sure of is that you will always be there
    I would say i love you but words aren't always enough i want to show you how much i appreciate you,
    I do care about you
    I need you believe it or not
    I know i never act like i need you or anyone else but i do
    I need your intellect and your respect
    I need your knowledge and devotion at times i feel like i need you too much
    It may not seem like i need you but i do
    I admire and am inspired by your very essence and pressence
    You have loved and stood by me when no one else has and for that i am eternally grateful
    In my short time on this earth i have learned to care for someone more than i do for myself
    It maybe a stetch and it may seem hard to believe but i kid you not and do not speak false
    At times i feel like i've needed you way before i met you
    I leave you with this statement
    I am what i am because of what you've given me and that is you
    that's the truth
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WOW! :great: :great: :great:

    " I feel like i've needed you way before I met you. "

    What you have given me is you! This is a very good :luvv: love dedication. Touching thru out. To need is not weak, to know and not say is.
     
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    so sweet and divine this leave a warm
    sunshine this was tyte ya flow is smooth
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi Brown n Sassy ...welcome to the door on the right...and enter into the house of love.
    that is a beautiful piece you slapped us with poet, it was sweet
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This sweet poem put a smile on my face. :toast:
     
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    AHMOSE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome back
    Thanx for sharing.
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ENCORE!!!!!!!!
     
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    Poetrymama Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    re:Thank You

    Sassy, this is a very beautiful poem.
     
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