Quiet Poetry Lounge : I Talked To My Soul

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  1. Blkthunder

    Blkthunder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I Talked to my soul and she told me this
    If I lived my life untrue she would be pissed
    "Every day is the first day of the rest of your life,
    Somedays will be dark but I am the light
    People will come to help you in life,
    never forget them always stay tight.
    Others will come that will do you no good
    They"ll put you down but your the engine that could"
    I talked to my soul and she told me this.....
    "Just live life to the fullest I'll take the risk
    I'm that fellingin your stomach that says do this or do that,
    I'm that feelin that tells you someones a rat.
    I'm am that spark of the devine with enough illumination
    to bring light to the nation
    I am the glow in your eyes
    like stars in the skies"
    I talked to my soul and she told me this......
    "Listen to me always and life will be bliss":toast:
     
  2. ladye

    ladye Active Member MEMBER

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    i am really feeling the inspiration
     
  3. Blkthunder

    Blkthunder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Me tooo.....thankxx
     
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    This is very nice the truth will come from the inner self.
     
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    Blkthunder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey thankx Ashanta....
    And true dat....
     
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    Kimdricka Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i'm really a big fan of yours. that was so good. keep on blessing me, chile!!!

    ~Kim
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis was very sweet and comfort within
    felt it deep down
    da inner soul speaketh out !
    very nice vibe
     
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    Blkthunder this is a moving piece/peace. I enjoy reading your flows.
     
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    Blkthunder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yo Kim .......thankx alot...you are blessed, I've peeped your stuff too
    Rich ma man ..as always thankx...I'm tryin
    and Sista Steele..thankx
    Thank you for takin the time to read and comment
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very moving piece
     
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