Black Poetry : I Surrender

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  1. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I Surrender

    I surrender a place
    within my heart
    I hold in this space
    Passion so deep
    Lust fills every inch,
    It consumes me
    Running warm in my veins

    A trying love
    Undying love
    at any cost,
    I shall know this love
    till life is no more
    I hold you in this place
    My most treasured place
    For ever my love
    I shall surrender all
     
  2. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    so peaceful so calm

    loving this Nita

    :heart:
     
  3. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes

    completely, "yes"

    thank you for speaking my heart and soul today. :)

    A
     
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    The surrender to my warm embrace
    and passion and lust within allow me to taste
    For I shall fill the void down inside
    and on wings of love we shall forever ride
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    surrender unto da flyte of love
    where it comfort u and hug
    it caress u in da warmth of bliss
    come my dear surrender to dis.

    tyte drop Nita maeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!
     
  6. klabarron

    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    baeutiful piece sista nita. surrender is the key to peace. nice flow. k
     
  7. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx Brother K
     
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