Black Poetry : I still want you

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by HODEE, Sep 4, 2003.

  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I miss you so much.
    I dream of you.
    I smell your fragrance
    soaking me boo.
    I hurt you I didn't mean to say
    I cared for you and hurt that way.

    I know you had another.

    I did too.

    But I feel something new when I'm with you.
    He wasn't doing it for you.
    He was in jail.
    I believe that angels fly low. :angel1:

    I didn't tell we had a thing.
    I didn't cause your man to fling.
    You out of his life.

    He wanted to go. He was :confused:
    He used me as an excuse.
    I know that this hurt you
    you said you loved him.
    You cared for me
    I loved you so.
    Now I don't have you, I'm :cry:
    and he is gone.
    I'm still missing,
    missing you so.

    Your friends your
    roommate told me
    you asked about me.

    She said you wanted me over.
    Don't play with my heart cause
    I'm serious about you.
    I'll have to leave my love behind.

    I know she will hurt.
    Right now it's about me.
    I won't tell you we were
    not getting along.
    It may be true
    but I love you boo.
    I want our love to prolong.

    Convince you care,
    convince you want.
    Me everyday in your life.
    I promised when I met you
    that you could be my wife.

    You take me places in the heart
    I had forgotten existed in me.
    Complete me baby.

    Call me and say.
    You love
    to be with me
    and see.

    I'll pack my stuff
    and come running your way.
    Apologize to those we hurt.

    I would rather spend my life with you.
    Than live all my life with this hurt.
    It's been a while since I heard from you.
    I often look at your pic.
    I still love you my darling.
    My burning desire.
    If I'm drugged then
    you are my fix.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    lay it out on the line
    and let it be known !
    tyte scribeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!
     
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    << got me all bothered...:eek: ..HOW BITTERSWEET... have been there.... actually AM there.. right NOW.. this VERY second.. ****!!
    WHAT we gonna do... BABY??(smiles).....(snaps).. how could I DENY how DEEP I am feeling this.:eek: . let me know how things turn out.... AHHHHHH!!!!! :confused: X's9
     
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    Hodee.............you gotta stop doing this to my heart.........:cry:

    I know exactly how this feels........lookin at the pic, reminiscing...

    knowing there the only one that can complete you within an

    existence of impossibilities..........but "love" will always overcome

    go get her!......................this was so touching!
     
  5. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If I could do it better. If I could go thru it again. I would have her here. A guy to a girl, is different and can be carried on even after the dust settles. A guy to a girl, if he hurts her, or breaks her heart in any way. Is shut out.

    SUNkissed go slow, and be his friend if not his at his time.
     
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    this was such a great flow:)
     
  7. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Angelicsage

    When I read your comment I raised out of my seat and was about to mount my stead. .
    Love is more than physical. Love is deeper than the sea. Love at first-sight is real. Love of possibilities. Be still.

    You can't stand near a fire and not get warmed by the heat.

    $$RICH$$ did I lay it on the line. Open fillet.

    ===============
    Do You Love Me?

    I am with you, though you're gone.
    Your presence lingers.
    Do I cross your mind?
    When the day is dawning, can you
    feel me moving over you?
    I often smell your
    fragrance, when you
    are not near. Do you
    love me?
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    For Your Love

    My Heart beats, so strong for you.
    My nights and days I think of you.
    I've done all I can to show I care.
    Your like fire burning to my soul.
    I whisper to you, but do you hear?
    Complete me please, I need you near.
    Love is strong - I know you care. If
    we never touch or make sweet love, I
    will cherish the knowledge and feelings
    of love.
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    How I feel

    A fond tender feeling, mind body and soul.
    Mental disposition. Love sweet unfold.
    Influence flowing affection. Based on ties.
    This is my affection. Looking thru my eyes.
    Interest is abundant. Largely on sexual
    desire. Devotion, contrasted with love.
    Looking in your eyes.
    ==============

    How I Feel !

    Each day I wake, the suns out and life rings.
    I look at my self and imagine good things.
    I start each day, with the hope of success.
    Some hours are grief, others filled with
    happiness. The love of my life is so far,
    yet so near.. I hear sweet words. My love
    whispers in my ear. I like this life, I see
    myself in. Today, I believe I'll find a
    new friend. It makes me happy, when I do
    good things. I can't wait for the sun to
    come out. What will life bring?
    ============

    I Have Traveled

    Your lips I want, your eyes I love.
    Your skin so sweet. I have been
    captured. I traveled daily thru
    the fog of life.
    When I saw you I realized I had been
    sleeping. This was not a chance encounter.
    When I looked upon your face I fell in love.
    Your long black hair, I long to touch.
    We spoke and shared ideas and
    dreams. Will you ever be mine? Am I
    to exist without your essence? I carry
    hope.
    ==============

    Kissing You

    You say your here. Your not
    your there. You are. Your close
    to me. Come together. Touch the
    spot. Your in my heart my sweet.
    Holding hands. Kissing lips, lets
    me know you care. Running fingers
    up your spine. Playing with your
    hair. Looking at you. Then your gone.
    Time slides into a stall. Frequent
    feeling like a man. Now your not here
    at all. Can we stop, this whirl wind
    love, and settle down a bit. I enjoy
    your time, your space in mine. The
    touch. The feel. The kiss.
    ===============

    Look At Me !

    Look at me now I'm as simple as I am.
    All complexity's have faded with time. I'm
    thinking for myself. Look into my eyes.
    See my heart, listen to my mind.
    I'm reaching out to you. Come close.
    I'm extended to my limit. Touch me now
    meet me.. me half the way.
    ===================
    When You Sleep!

    When you sleep, dream of places you've
    been before. You speak to people. Now
    that seems real. You picture them in
    your mind. Some dreams are vivid, you
    know the voice and who they may ... have
    been. It makes me smile, when I wake up.
    I knew that was you !! "Good Morning"
    ==========
    Lost Friendship!

    It hurts so much, I think of you.
    The things I didn't say. Lost
    Friendship! It's raining now.
    I always wanted to write about
    the rain. I have memories of mid-
    western rain storms...Well it's
    here. Unlike before it's pouring
    through me like a violent, torrential
    river. It's intense metallic rage,
    has ripped apart something good.
    Resonance.. so loud, I don't remember
    this sound. How could I deceive you?
    The lie, the truth. Like the
    coast of Seattle. Days and days
    of rain. Music rain, pounding rain,
    the sweetness of rain will
    be forever a memory now. Lost
    Friendship...silence was the crime.
    In hindsight, I Lost Friendship! In
    prescience I knew. It was stupid.
     
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    wow, deep sighs, now that is real, yes, let it flow , hodeeeeeeee:rolling: :rolling: :rolling:
     
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    Hodee,
    I feel your pain so much through your words. I feel more strongly about love than anything else in this world, and if this is the person you love...you need to do everything in your power to be with her. It's better to say at least i tried, than to say I wish I had tried.
     
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    dude...it neva feels good to get played...
    and believe me, no matta who you are
    it happens to all of us at one time or another...
    i hope that she realizes how much you care for her...
    if not, take this as a life lesson and move on...
    because the energy you put out there in the universe
    shall return to you thrice fold...
    peace
    khasm
     
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