Black Poetry : I still think of you

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  1. Defiantson

    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    [CENTER]I still think of you

    I thought of you tonight
    And tears of sorrow
    Rolled down my face
    Wishing only to hold you again
    Like I did when where one
    But with my tears flowing
    My heart aches and yearns for you

    I now know what it truly meant
    To have ever loved
    And as I think of you with my teary eyes
    Thoughts of yesteryears come to mind
    Like the day when we first
    Fell in love
    I miss that feel
    Wishing I could have it back

    You gave me something
    That no one has ever given me
    Hope and the will to love again
    I know it’s too late for all this
    But what if I placed a ring on your hand
    And made you my wife

    And what if the thought of you
    Would be the first at day break
    And the last of nightfall
    What if you and I
    Where to raise your children
    As one and not two

    What if I could make you smile?
    Not only tomorrow
    But every day after
    Isn’t that a lovely thought?

    It’s been 2 months
    And my I still feel the same way about you
    As the day we first made love
    I don’t want to think
    Of how things went bad
    Trust me I have learned from them

    If I was to lay down and go to sleep
    I could only wish that
    You would be in my dream
    Loving me the way you use to

    And what if I told you
    That every day that I am apart from you
    I miss you more and more
    Because in reality I do
    What if we meet 2 years from now?
    And I told you that I still
    Want you as my wife
    Would you believe me?
    Or would you think
    That I am telling you a lie

    You have brought out things about me
    That I didn’t even know still existed
    And now with these tears in my eyes
    I pray, that one day
    The love we had
    Will return again
    I know that things right now
    Are not the same
    But believe me
    If you loved me once
    That those feelings are still there
    Deep in my heart
    Deep in my soul
    I miss you

    You where the best poem
    I have ever had the pleasure
    Of reading
    And with this I put my heart on the line
    And tell you
    I still love you
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    holding sweetly in the mind and heart
    this was awesome tyte poet !!
     
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    bigdrizzle Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was an excellent piece...Keep flowin'!
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this piece was raw!!!!!!!!!
     
  5. Wisdom7

    Wisdom7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Once again, beautiful. I had to read one of yours to my friend. Looks like I'll be on the phone again.
     
  6. Defiantson

    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow I don't even know what to say about the phone thing but I asume its a good thing. Thank you for just reading it.

    Mannie
    Poet and Host of the Verbal High
    www.theverbalhigh.com
     
  7. Defiantson

    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I just want to say thanks to everyone who took time out to read my poem.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whew....Now that is love, pure...straight from the heart. A love like that doesn't just disappear with a snap of a finger, it lingers. Poet I intend on giving you rep props for this, but if I can't because I have to spread some rep around first, know that it was my intention.
     
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    Very good thing!
     
  10. Defiantson

    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    We all good through stuff and love is something I appriciate just to have learned again. With time my wound will heal. Thanks though...
     
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