Black Poetry : I Still Remember You

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Kori, Oct 23, 2003.

  1. Kori

    Kori Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It's been much to long since we've spoke
    Many days since i've been blessed with the sound of your voice
    Thoughts constantly plague me and im wondering
    Where you are, How you feel, Waht you're doing
    Do you miss me?
    The time flew by and most of ours was spent apart
    But, I still remember you
    My love for you is changing.
    it grows with everyday that i dont hear from you
    Everyday we are apart, my love for you doubles in capacity
    There is never a day i dont want to be with you
    You are not here and you haven't realized yet
    But, I still remember you...I still miss you...I still love you
    And I always will
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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  3. Kori

    Kori Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    gracias!!!:)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    beautifully posed the warmth is felt within
     
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    Kori, You put into words what my heart once felt. Thank you.
     
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    eternal Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Kori, this was on point. I had a love like this before.
     
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    feeling the missing
    deep
    wonderful flow
    Peace
     
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