Black Poetry : I Still Miss You

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  1. howardtsu

    howardtsu Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    when is my way of living going to catch up with "The Real World"?

    when is my way of giving going to catch up with a real girl?

    i don't know. but watching Danny and Melinda steal and twirl

    each others hearts

    makes me wish i was more than an upstart

    in a pretty girl's life

    but there's no changing the fact she's someone else's wife

    and Knoxville girls are so cute

    but rarely do i conversate with women who inspire me to play my flute

    so repetitively



    love,

    howard
     
  2. GHETTOAMBITION

    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dat was a nice piece
    so much desire of luv in derr
    i luved it
    so flo on



    blackluv and bp
     
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    abstract219 ...standing on the shoulders of giants MEMBER

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    very thoughtful work...i see the mind behind the lines....great write, Howard
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    How did i miss this master piece Howard man yo expression of love brings musical notes
     
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    sweet apple*pie Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes, I found this poem to be very sweet indeed.
     
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