Black Poetry : I Still Miss Her

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  1. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Can't stop thinking of her

    she entered my life just a few years ago

    and though we both had our own worlds

    we connected

    created

    new inspirations

    and creations

    now time has passed

    and my greatest fear has come to pass

    for we have drifted

    shifted into other areas

    I wonder if she ever knew

    that I truly

    loved her

    she was my destiny

    but I guess even destiny

    is not always absolute

    Now my spirit has returned

    to its world of lonliness

    with no one to connect with

    no thoughts

    no inspiration

    not even a sound

    just the humming of silence

    as I sit back on the Sea called Love

    watching

    and missing

    her
     
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    I sure do miss him
    My missing puzzle piece
    Our connection made a complete picture
    that made all the world's beauty increase

    Woke up singing a song
    Went to sleep humming one too
    We sang in two part harmony
    Making melodies like songbirds do

    But now it hurts to remember
    the songs we used to sing
    I try to forget him, but
    his image appears in everything

    I sure do miss him

    Hope you don't mind the flowback. This was well felt poet, well felt.
     
  3. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    Bishop

    the original mac

    glad your back man

    love reading your work

    you have a way writing where a guy can feel your work too

    feel me playa

    the one you miss would love this too
     
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    awwww Brotha B :grouphug:
    sincerely felt my brotha :read:
    Healing comes in due season brotha but i think a part of you will always miss her
    I agree with so'ja... she'd probably love this
     
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    A writer's loss of inspiration...

    can be as unpleasant as a stream of sunless days

    For me, sometimes its awkward to say a piece that stirs
    sad emotions, is beautiful. But that’s exactly what this
    piece is, sad, yet beautiful! I hope your paths cross again
    to rekindle mutual inspirations.

    Maddsistahlylove!
    Coco
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    often what seem missing has a way to return in the grasp ....keep ya eyez peel.
    awesome scribe brother Bishop
     
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    Awwww man! This was surely a heartfelt piece....
     
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    i wish someone loved me like this

    Beautiful Bishop ... :love:

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    Destee...oh never mind...
     
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    In the Spirit of Sankofa!




    Could you recognize it?

     
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