Black Poetry : I Still Love You

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Tantrum, Oct 11, 2006.

  1. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Poetic You Still Love Me???

    Im in love with love
    Like white falls from clouds not snow but doves/
    Yet my heart tells tales of love
    Many heart breaks but I look past it cause/
    The woman that consoled me and told me how she felt
    I've been missing you every time I see you on the internet/

    Im in love with love
    Like bubble baths and champagne no suds/
    Beauty im no beast and im no ones dude
    No not a thug just stuck in our love/
    I know you remember our love
    I've been gone for a while but you remember our love/

    Im in love with love
    I mean im still in love/
    Fell out of place but my mind is clear
    Steered away from the headlights but it hits harder than deer/
    I use to be scared to express my words
    Tell you that you where all mine it was more than words/
    What we had was more than a blur
    I was your comforter you faux yes your fur/

    Im in love with love
    Cause my heart still skips spaces/
    Mind gets stuck in cruise no matter the mood
    Tantrum a go getter lyrics meant to sooth/
    But our love is in its prime so it do what it do
    No fake puppy love baby caresses so smooth/
    Let me tell you something that no other can say to you
    I know you missing me baby im missing you too.....

    Im In Love
    Im still in love
    Poetic you still love me???
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    poeticly in love with love so poetic that holds a craving deeper within
    awesome piece bruh !
     
  3. Sweet baby_face

    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Awwwwww!!!!!!
    This is so beautiful.
    Gettin' a girl misty-eyed over here.
    :luvv: :luvv: :luvv: :luvv: :luvv:
     
  4. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey Tantrum:
    Your joint is going on. I
    wanted to flo with that. But
    I'm goona pass.
    NIce to see your pen on the forum.


    Much Luv
     
  5. howardtsu

    howardtsu Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i'm in love with poetry

    especially when the floetry

    is this talented

    great poem Tantrum :welldone:
     
  6. IfUComeSoftly

    IfUComeSoftly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice to see poetry still moves us

    nice drop tantrum
     
  7. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    break it down poet

    break it down

    and did you get an answer yet???


    peace
     
  8. da TRUTH

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    THAT WAS REAL CUTE,
     
  9. Amun-Ra

    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Keep the sentiment coming--you summed it up in "I'm in love with love" because I think that it what affects us all--yes, we love another, but the feeling of being in love is a powerful aphrodesiac in itself--keep on scbinin'--nice--Amun-Ra
     
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