Black Poetry : ...I STILL FEEL...

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  1. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i feel
    i feel you
    its real
    its all you..



    i still feel
    your lips on mine
    the ever real
    passing of time
    the way you spoke
    in our embrace
    the words you spoke
    my breath inate
    i still hold
    you in my arms
    though i am told
    your very far
    i still feel
    the things you did
    it seems so real
    so candid
    take me up
    to join you now
    fly me up
    far in the clouds
    i still feel
    you next to me
    feels so real
    you inside of me
    grippin my skin
    moanin ya name
    comes from within
    i think i'm insane
    the way it felt
    with you inside
    still makes me melt
    as screams subside
    just sittin' here
    oh how it soothed!
    makes me never fear
    my love was only used
    i still feel
    you in me
    feels so real
    think i'm coming....



    i still feel
    you so real
    it feels real
    i still feel...
     
  2. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    glad to see ya back sista...:)
     
  3. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    loving this flow sister
    Peace
     
  5. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks.... :shades:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    u still feel it
    deep into it
    lovin it
    flow on
    let it be known
    happy ya back in full force
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice flow...:angel1:
     
  8. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks everybody:)
     
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