Quiet Poetry Lounge : I Still Feel You

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by NDeep, Sep 5, 2003.

  1. NDeep

    NDeep Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lurking behind my heart
    Lingering in the depths of my soul
    Envading my thounghts,
    Forgetting not, as you haunt my memories
    Hallucinating and daydreaming about the things we used to do and...
    I still feel you
    Together standing before the horizon,
    Watching the blazing sun arising
    Me and you, hand and hand, inseparable
    Or so I thought...but somehow...
    I still feel you
    Right next to me. I remember...
    Teaching one another new philosophy and
    Thinking about one another constantly and
    Talking to each other honestly and
    Toching each other sensually and
    I still feel you
    Listening to me carefully and
    Teasing me playfully and
    Loving me truthfully and
    Wanting me openly and
    I still feel you
    Reaching the inside of my soul
    that magnificent body I used to hold
    Now I'm alone
    My toes no longer hold that same curl
    Spritz is the only thing keeping my world
    I still feel you
    Inside of me
    I still feel you
    On top of me
    I still feel you
    Underneath me
    I still feel you...like a
    Summer Breeze....now you're gone
    And it's cold as Hell....
     
  2. SUNkissed

    SUNkissed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    (snifs).. that was a sweetest
    I am feelin this...flow
    (snaps)
    beautifully expressed.
     
  3. Randee

    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow. . .you hit that on the head.

    i still feel too.
     
  4. Randee

    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow. . .you hit that on the head.

    i still feel too.
     
  5. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you know i just wrote a poem today about missing someone that once was...it's nice to know that i'm not alone in feeling the emptiness a good love gone bad or wrong, or just plain gone can cause. much love and respect.
     
  6. renee31127

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    I'm feelin this.
     
  7. blaquebutterfli

    blaquebutterfli Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    so beautifully heartfelt
     
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    this was super baddd, yes i can relate for real,,,,:D :D :kiss: :kiss:
     
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