Black Poetry : I Still Feel Blessed

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by arthur1210, May 18, 2004.

  1. arthur1210

    arthur1210 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I want these written words to move her
    My expression to be profound
    So she can feel the depths of my joy
    Due to the fact she’s still around
    When we met I knew it would happen
    In moments together we found
    Her delights kept hitting me with a force
    As an undisputed, world renown

    Intelligent, diligent, prudent
    As well as devoted and true
    Needless to say, I can’t get enough
    When intimacies starts to brew
    Her smile has become my remedy
    Through moments when my smiles are few
    I benefit from rapport we share
    She can inspire me on cue

    Now we've been together for some years
    With a promise... a vow for life
    In these years we've seen wonderful things
    And a little trouble and strife
    Still, I look at the ring on my left hand
    With belief my decision was right
    Then, truly confess, I still feel blessed
    Because, this woman is still my wife

    For MY Queen... AIG
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was so beautiful it will melt her heart for sure
    sweet release
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh what a wonderful flow
    what a lucky sister she is
    thanks for sharing
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    monad.poetress Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was so beautiful and touching :star:
    Very well written

    Monad.poetress
     
  5. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Beautiful...
    and yes
    when a man findeth
    a wife...

    He findeth a "Good" thing...

    Blessed indeed...Encore :spinstar:
     
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