Black Poetry : I stand...

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I stand accused of loving you.
    Loving you!
    But I got this problem
    That burns deep inside…
    My soul dies
    As tears run from my eyes
    More and more I seem like the woman
    In stress as you pamper this and that
    Taken care of others problems
    When we have some of our own
    You fail to see I hurt
    But I sit still in a hush..
    Thinking you would notice
    But you just walk on by…
    ......................a kiss and a hello
    And there you go
    To mend someone else’s problems
    When we have our own

    See…. This man
    He treats me real nice
    Makes me happy full of joy I be
    But I got this problem
    And I don’t know how to deal with it
    I don’t want to give him up
    But the feeling I got inside…
    Its time to release
    its time ….
    To put my foot down
    And stand my ground….
    But I don’t know how
    He makes me laugh
    When I don’t want to laugh
    Places a smile in my heart
    I am so trap by this thing
    Slowly losing my dayum mind
    I can feel this thing
    As it invades my soul….
    and lifts my spirit
    I can’t seem to hide…
    As much as I try….
    It finds me..
    no matter what I seem to do
    Slowly sinking down
    Trap…see no way out
    As the power takes over
    Got me turning in circles
    Baby, Loving you….is what
    I am accused of.....
    And this thing called love
    Got a hold on me
    Now lets deal with our problems....

    (C) 2004
    untitle life
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Love l-e-t-t-e-r-s... and I sign myself to you, baby!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    da emotions
    da depth of it
    the pain
    thee thrill
    much feelings
    expression
    well said release speak
    and mend da problem
    coz it's LOVE
    tyte drop sistah Queen
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A problem ignored still remains, a problem, it's just hidden out of sight but not out of mind. Emotively flowed.
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wonderful poem sis
    you brought it out straight
    nice flow
    Peace~N~love
    BlueWater:heart:
     
  6. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you family for the love on dis
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very very well spoken, sister, and so beautifully honest.
     
  8. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you gempis for your loving support sis
    much love to ya
    Angel
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tight poetry....flow on:)
     
  10. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks...angel
     
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