Black Poetry : I STAND (reply to 4everluv)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Sha'iyn, Dec 12, 2007.

  1. Sha'iyn

    Sha'iyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Baby, I would love to spend the rest of this life with you
    please understand, I do, I do
    but, also overstand what i'm saying is true.
    I can huff and puff until my face turns blue
    Please innerstand the space between two
    this space is filled with riddles and clues
    and no true meanings to stand up to
    outerstand boo, i am a galactical man
    you are a universal woman
    so, allow me to expand
    and when i take your hand
    if mines is clean
    i will place a new ring on the finger of my queen
    make me the king of kings
    let's play, pray, and stay together
    let's sway through the bad weather
    and bask in the sunshine
    so, yes i understand you
    only if you can
    go with me to germany and we'll both uberstand
    can you withstand the threshold
    if not, let's end this masquerade
    and i'll let you rest in the shade
    there's money to be made
    love to be laid on the line and played
    Upperstand my feelings like a master to a slave
    the tables have turned
    and so has the hourglass
    the matter of hate has burned
    to a gray ash
    alas, you stand with me regretting no time lost
    the past is left empty expecting no write-offs
    right on! just kiss me like it's bigger than you and i
    yet and still we know it's not
    Hoverstand the plot!

    Shuga Shane
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi Sha'iyn
    Oh my gosh! Wow!
    ^5 I love this flow
    It is so supportive, and humble
    Wonderful read, I love the feel
    very cool ..


    Peace~N~Love
     
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    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :em1100: My Goodness
    smh
    All I can really say is
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    Really
    :10200:
    smh
    :10200:
    It was just.....Desert
     
  4. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Word play on overdrive poet, and your writes always have a crisp feel to them. Looking forward to 4Everluv's reply.
     
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    Lloyd Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I do agree.4everluv,whatz the answer?
     
  6. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    um

    you of ALL people

    i know i'm not mad at ya

    you came back on point here poet

    you did the danggone thing
     
  7. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sha'iyn, Sha'iyn, Sha'iyn:
    Only you could could pen
    such an endearing relply.
    This was really cool....really nice...
    Im not gonna flo back on it, (believe it or not)
    Just going to enjoy it. You are too sweet.
    :qqb018:


    Much Luv
     
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