Black Poetry : I stagger

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by blakverb, Jul 12, 2001.

  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I
    .....am....
    a...man
    ..............staggering
    ..after....
    being punched.......
    by
    ...a feeling.....that you
    implanted in my head....
    it is rooted in my...........
    brain stem......pushing
    impulses onto dendrites
    during synapse.....
    and I s...
    h...
    ......a...
    k....
    ...........e
    like a leaf.....
    praying for the wind to continue.

    (c)2001 blakverb "just a quikkie"
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ROCKED WORLD

    OF PASSION SHE LAID UPON U
    AS THE GENTLE BREEZE BLOW
    U AND YA PEN JUST FLOW
    KEEP PRAYING AS THE WINDS
    SPEAKETH 2 U IN WHISPERS

    VERB DES BE TYGHT!!!:toast:
     
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    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sometimes quickies can even
    fulfill...
    thank you for this
    i thoroughly enjoyed it!
    -7:spinstar:
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    loving the art though

    you stagger
     
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    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Words!

    Great use of form and words of the literal mind--well done!

    Amun-Ra

    ;)
     
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