Black Poetry : I spoke to u last night

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I spoke to u
    last night wit my
    mind / heart & soul
    beyond words
    my mind had unfold
    da true beauty
    felt deeply in my soul
    as we share
    hearts of lovin gold
    a treasured gift
    unspoken words
    through da guts
    our minds had mold
    telling a secrecy
    gentle yet bold
    the story we now told

    I spoke to u
    last night in my mind
    clashing sweet memories
    to keep through all time
    speaking in flashy colors
    and mental thoughts
    captured in my heart
    from da feeling this brought
    when my thinking has start
    compassionate waves of craves
    as da depth of us touched
    my soul took in and clutched
    tightly yet firmly
    in thou arms art thee

    I spoke to u
    last night remotely
    with signs of tender care
    as my heart compromised
    my soulful beings are their
    crossing essence of love
    i talked about u and me
    talked about us becoming a we
    as it all played out in my mind
    gave me many rays of shine
    but
    somehow i didn't hear u there
    i saw u standing in a forfronts
    of my mental state
    and u vanished just before i awake
    i spoke to u lastnight .
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    With beautiful thoughts such as these, she must have known that your mind was on her, and responded to your call. This flowed like a tender breeze.
     
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    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    There are so many things I miss about being on here. Your voice Is one I seem to miss the most. I love it as always.
     
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    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$ What's Up???
    You and this lady.....SMH
    I just dont know why...
    Is she really Taking you on this ride?
    Does she know
    Is it me???......

    This was really deep Brother
    Stay true.....
    :heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    maybe watz she can feel me mentally speaking from afar u think !
    thankz honey for the loving visit as alwayz

    Aweeeee! so sweet u might catch me on friday nights poetry throwdown
    in chat speaking one day , nice to be feeling your pen again too don't
    stay away too long on us we miss you tooooooo!!!! Thatgirl74

    PLATINUMILLITY1

    The purity of my love is up high for this lady
    of unknown yet mentally seen again & again
    and yes a ride i can't let go or get off of
    and she really don't know what she doing to me
    and it could be thee .....!

    Thankz for the visit inside da depth of my mind maze
     
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    FattnBeautiful Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That was beautiful.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thank u FattnBeautiful for the visit and love shown here.
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Great flow $$RICH$$

    She spoke to you and you heard.
    Looking into her eye's, heart and her words
    Finding all reasons to exist
    To hold her in your arms, and recieve her kiss
     
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    I heard the beautiful words you spoke
    made my eyes tear and my heart felt broke
    that you would think I was not listening to you
    when you were speaking to me in your mind
    it was my love that was inspiring you.

    Do I need to tell you that I love this....
    you know I do.

    Much Luv
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thankz brother HODEE man sometime da mind speaks as my mental
    sweep the thoughts ........

    O'my dear 4EVERLUV thank u and yes i know u would run deep into this
    as da mind spoke and one heard ......smile
     
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