The Front Porch : I spoke at 4am.

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  1. Ronni

    Ronni New Member MEMBER

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    I spoke.
    When I spoke I felt myself
    As I spoke I became healed
    I realized my voice was created for the good of all people
    and most importantly for the good of my soul
    my soul emptied and I could finally dance
    I could finally sing songs of joy, melodies of happy,
    words of positivity was all I spoke
    and it became never ending like a flesh eating virus
    vomiting during every hour, I threw up my past, and flushed my love for you down the drain into the sea, my broken heart spread out into all unknown destinations as I spoke
    As I emptied.
    As I danced.
    As I sung.
    As I vomited.
    As I flushed.
    As I no longer hurt for you.
     
  2. MsVeraisblessed

    MsVeraisblessed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome to Destee. Nice opening poem.. I hope you have more to share
     
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    um, maybe he just not that into you?:10500:
     
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    Doesn't matter....If SHE's healthier not being "into" HIM any longer, then THAT is what does matter.
     
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    Strong, cathartic piece, Sister! Well done/Well said! :toast:

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