Black Poetry : I Sit.....

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I sit
    Inside my walls
    Thinkin afar
    Wonderin and wishin
    One day…as time runs slow
    Candles glow my soul
    uplifts
    As the sweet scent
    Takes me in to my world
    I sit…
    Tryin to relax
    And clear my mind
    Like a child
    Restless in the night…
    Thoughts seem to flow
    And disappear..as my
    world goes up side down
    my heart begins to sink
    so
    I sit…..
    but this is my quiet time…
    but still thinkin..why
    as my mind goes and comes
    and then it stops….but in time
    it runs all over again and again..
    tryin to unfold and ease all the
    pain …..trashin my worries
    driftin..........
    alone in my world
    I sit…..as tears run down
    I sit
    Inside my walls
    Thinkin afar
    Wonderin and wishin
    One day…as time runs slow
    As my thoughts go by……

    a blkangel thang
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i too sit in thoughts of such
    feel u deep here soon the light
    will shine bright wit faith hold on !
     
  3. black rose

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    oohh I like this piece alot
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks family for da love...
    much love to all yall :angel1:

    $$RICH$$..we all go there at times..thanks fo feelin me...

    Olakuoto..love is within me..thnaks fo da love

    black rose..i am happy you like...thankz
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Capturing the feel of roaming and rampant thoughts...very nice indeed.
     
  6. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes rambling around
    ya know them lost thoughts
    there for one minute then gone....
    i tell ya :angel1:
     
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    nice one...
    we all sit and contemplate
    from time to time
    one love
    khasm
     
  8. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks fo da love on dis..my brother...:angel1:
     
  9. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    just a thought 2 a thought

    Stand Up My Sister My Princess, My Queen. Release the mind of the weak and cold stand up and feel my embrace, come on in and take hold. Stand up Black Bueaty, Grown Woman, Fruit of my Rib...Your not alone because even in your mind I live!

    Loved this one so it inspired a lil something something. :coffee:
     
  10. PositiveMindset

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    Nice piece.

    Sometimes U have 2 sit alone...
    and wonder...
    contemplate the U...
    in order 2 find the U...
    so someone else can.