Black Poetry : I Sigh....

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  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    And I sigh....
    Gazing up at the sky
    Watching you drift up high
    Upon the stratosphere you lie
    Knowing the stars
    fill my heart
    with the sparkle of
    the luv you impart
    The aura of you
    cascades down my mind
    Creating a rainbow so vivid
    it **** near strikes me blind
    Wondering if that
    glistening pot of gold
    will ever truly be ours
    to have and to hold
    I sigh....
    As this love's
    heavenly embrace
    leaves it's eternal
    flame in place
    Brightly flickering,
    illuminating through
    Sweetheart, indeed,
    I burn for you
    As
    I sigh......
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Da yearning
    da burning
    Da feeling
    sweet dealing
    the moment
    i sigh
    feel good a
    sweet divine sunshine
    dis was ummmmm!!!!!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes, Rich, that yearning and burning, sweetly feeling, reeling...in that sunshine. I sigh...Thank you.....
     
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    stay in it coz it's beautiful and divine
    feel da sweet sigh of it wit compassion
    and know at the end da one and only
    will be standing awaiting wit a shhhhh!!!
     
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    See now you got me over here
    sighin! I know that feeling!
    I had to get my sigh on a
    time or two before.

    Loving the drop as usual!
    You bring it all so vividly!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Okay...alrighty..... :smooch:....sigh....Thank you Rich...;)
    Yes, Purplemoons, sometimes ya just gotta get your sigh on...thanks sis.
     
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    Oooooh this was sweet and lovely. You got me drifting up high woth this one.

    greets
    moham
     
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    My, my haven't I had my share of "burning sigh's" ...did I say burning? ...
    well I really meant "flaming sigh's" ...how well I remember and feel ya.
     
  9. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you moham, I hope the drift was a peaceful experience for ya. :)
    Nice to know you feel me on this queent, thank you poetess.
     
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    Loving this, watzinaname. Nice flow. Deep eomtions.
     
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