Black Poetry : I Shoulda Bin A Bastid...with A Twist*

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  1. M. O. A. B.

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    THERE WOULDA BIN SUCH A DIFFERENCE
    IN THE LOVE WE COULDA MADE
    I WOULDA LOVED YOU WIT TENDERNESS
    TO YOUR FULFILLMENT
    UNLIKE DEM UDDAS
    WHO WAS ONLY in it JUST TO GIT LAID!

    WHY PRAY TELL, WAS THE IDEA OF OUR KISSIN'
    SO FOREIGN TO YOU?
    WHUT MADE MY LIPS, SO UNDESIREABLE TOO?

    YOUR REJEKSHUN SPUN MY HEART
    FROM A DARK CLOUD, TO A SLOW DRIZZLIN' RAIN
    MADE ME FEEL UNWANTED, LIKE AN INTRUDER
    IN CASE I TUK A NOSHUN, TO EVER TRY AGAIN?!

    WHY ARE THE GUYS WIT GOOD HEARTS
    ALWAYS TAKIN ADVANTAGE OF
    EVEN THOUGHT OF AS PUNKS, AND WIMPS
    WHILE, THE SO-CALLED "man" THAT
    TREATS SOME WOMEN LIKE ****
    ARE THE ONES DESIRED, SOUGHT AFTER
    LIKE HOE'S LOOKIN' FOR THE "best pimp"!

    YOU COULDA TOLD ME DAT I WUZZINT
    ON YOUR LIST OF "LOVE"/PHYSICAL CANDIDATES
    THEN I WOULDA MOVED ON
    INSTEAD OF STAYIN' AROUND ALLOWING FEELIN'S
    AND AFECKSHUNS FOR YOU TO GERMINATE

    AZ YOU LIED, LEADIN' ME ON
    KNOWIN' FULL WELL, AT LEAST WIT ME
    YOU WUZ NEVER GONNA "GIT IT ON"!

    WUZZINT I WURTH THE TIME IT'D TAKE
    TA BE TOLD DA TRUTH?
    OR DID LYIN' BECOME SUCH SECOND NATURE
    YOU KAIN'T DISTINGUISH BETWIXT DA TWO!?

    BUT, DATS O.K. I GOT DA MESSAGE
    I TRUELY REALIZE NOW
    WHY gurlz LIKE you
    ARE IN REALITY REFERRED TO,
    AS FEMALE BOW-WOWS
    AND TO THAT END
    ITZ YOU'RE TYPE DAT KEEPS REAL FEMALE DOGS
    FROM EVER BECOMING, MANS..BEST..FRIEND!!!!

    *CUZ YOU WUZ A *****
     
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    M . O . A . B

    ya laid down some heavy stuff here
    but let da world know dis motion
    as u bring da real truth home .......i'm lovin dis :)
     
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    sir....i thank you most humbly for your comments
    as well as the read!
    women, (not all, not most, but a hell of a lot of them) for some
    strange reason cannot fathom the actuality of having what they
    claim to want. if i were here from another planet and had to view
    the dichotomous display they perpetrate, i would leave here
    faster than a scalded dog to keep from becoming "involved"!
    but, thanks be to THE CREATOR, i am not from somewhere else.
    i thank HIM also, that the entity that HE created, (those
    snowflakes, because there aren't two exactly alike anywhere)
    from the rib of man, can be a pain in the........side, and for the most part be oh so loving, and loveable!*

    *didn't mean to be so wordy...it's just how it came out!

    MENDE OLOWANDE ASHANTI BLACKTHORN
     
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    truely

    i feel ya on every line and every motion
    keep ya head up and continue being strong!
     
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