Black Poetry : I See

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by lilchitownlady, Oct 16, 2001.

  1. lilchitownlady

    lilchitownlady Member MEMBER

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    I see

    I see ya watching over your back
    big baggy shirt with dreads laced
    with rocks tucked under your cap

    I see ya walk'n in ya bigger than big jeans
    neck and writst sparlk'n like....bling....bling....bling
    now how do you flow call'n our women bitchez,
    chicken heads, huchees and whoe

    I see LiL brother
    ya just not in the know

    I see ya styling, profiling on 20" rims
    which way you think you head'n
    that road your travel'n......it's a **** dead end.

    Allow me to let you in on a
    LiL someth'n someth'n before you roll,
    disrespecting your women, your hood,
    yourself is not the way to take control

    I see if you wanna carve a safe place
    in this world for you and yours
    Start living your life the right way before
    we bury your *** or lock you behind prison doors.

    copyright ©2001 LiL Chi-Town Lady
     
  2. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    real message.

    it's time for youth to see another spectrum of light...

    nfinite
    jh.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sho ya right

    talk dem wordz to da young blood !!
    give them new hope :(
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i see you laid this down like that...

    i see you know the flow of the streets
    that's constantly giving a brutha
    a beat down
    that he can't see
    coz his sights
    ...his vision
    is distorted
    by a consortium
    of wrongs
    giving him platinum
    everything
    'til
    the jailhouse blues
    we hear him sing
    if
    we hear him sing.

    NICE FLOW.