Black Poetry : i see you...

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  1. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i see you...

    stuck
    in
    deep-rooted anger
    in danger
    of
    mental implosion {ka boom}
    heart and emotions
    a roller coaster
    of
    "I'VE HAD ENUFF"
    as you stand on the gulf
    overlooking all the
    {I'M SORRY}s
    presented you
    by he who
    made your happiness
    desert you
    yes
    i see you
    surrounded by
    swirling mists of
    stress and mess
    and all the heartache
    laid on your chest
    when
    I LOVE YOU
    rings hollow and wrong
    when
    life without him
    continues on
    no more
    BABY, PLEASE
    do you have to hear
    as you step out
    alone
    trembling in fear
    of what could happen
    out there
    on your own

    alone

    i see you

    my systah

    HANDLING YOURS.
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ...can i just tell you that... ya **** is just sooooo
    real to me!? well... it is!! :)

    keep on handlin' Yours... my Brotha!! write on!!

    i'm watchin'... Always. :)

    OneLuv.
    SunShyne~
     
  3. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANK YOU, GA...

    for bringing the warmth of Sunshyne into this wonderfully blessed day.:)...and thanks for the read.

    peace&manyblessings.