Black Poetry : I See You

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by arthur1210, Apr 28, 2004.

  1. arthur1210

    arthur1210 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    How do I say how good it was to see you,
    tell you what seeing you did?

    How do I tell you all the things I want,
    and all the pleasant things I can give?

    How do I get to be in your presence,
    and get to visit where you live?

    How do I display my desire within,
    and how strong this desire is?

    So, very, precious is the sight of you
    I now want to know all that I can

    I want to learn all the things you enjoy
    I want you to make me understand

    I want to know how good my hand will feel
    when it is holding your hand.

    I genuinely want to pull you close to me
    I want to feel the way you dance

    It could be incredible to be with you
    Will I get my opportunity to know?

    Will I find the opportunity to plant a seed?
    Will I see the time to help it grow?

    Will you be as enlivened and roused as I
    Will you admire the ways I flow?

    Will you appreciate the way that I do...
    Or, God forbid... will you tell me no?
     
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    turtle1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice drop!!
    keep it coming!!!
     
  3. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Will she?, will she not?, will she?, will she not? ...is the question. Oh I think she will. this is a nice piece to deliver...here's hoping it's excepted the same way. hope to hear more.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    she will she will she will !!!!
    tyte piece
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh my...
    this was like
    a gorgeous sunset...
    you never want to see
    fade away...
    but there is always
    and end...
    but the memory of
    the journey last forever...

    Thanks for the lovely voyage...
    All caught up...in your poetry... :spinstar:
     
  6. arthur1210

    arthur1210 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm glad folks are feelig me
    Just thoughts most of us keep in a simular situation
     
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    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It's a catch 22 lovin this piece
    flow on:wink:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was so sweet, well, you never know until you take a step, difficult as that may be, and yes, this is something most can relate to.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    likes sweet drop