Black Poetry : i see the woman in you...

When your spirit was down
…self esteem drooping low
when your mind kept telling you
‘gurl, you gotta let go’
I SAW THE WOMAN IN YOU
When it appeared your world
Had fallen away
When opportunity came knocking
And you had nothing to say
I SAW THE WOMAN IN YOU
When your family turned their back
…talked about you like a dog
when you lost your ride
your crib
and your job
when your bank ran out
and your homies too
you fell to your knees
you didn’t know what else to do
GOD SAW THE WOMAN IN YOU
HE touched my heart
And pointed the way
Instructed my lips
On the good I could say
Still, you were hesitant
When I gave you my name
You wondered about baller
And the rest of my game
YOU’VE
Forgotten that a brutha
Sometimes come correct
No games
No lies
And delivering RESPECT
Didn’t believe that GOD
Had delivered unto you
An answer to your prayers
In the form of ME, boo.

STILL, I SEE THE WOMAN IN YOU.

 

go 'head Baller!!

luv it!



Destee

 

BALLER....

this!... has touched my heart!!
it is a wonderful expression of love...
thank you for sharing... cause it allows
me an inside view... & now
I SEE THE BEAUTIFUL BLACK MAN IN YOU!!!

AlwaysLove...
Sunshyne~

 

Wow!

This was beautiful, sincere and emotional!! Proof that there are many good, honest, loyal, dedicated and Godly men, black men in this world.

(felt like the woman you described was Me!)lol

Thank you!

 

Takes your breath

Well done poet! A piece of you, a piece of sincerity and a piece of eternity--well done--Ra

 

Baller

You've peered into my soul
Beneath the outer cloak I'd wear
Of smiles and gestures of "being-ok"
Yet, Still a woman...You saw there
Led by HIS grace, you came along
With kind words, given from HE
~Reluctance in the Air~
Still, a woman you saw in me

This is a beautiful piece baller...Me liking this!
Jyntl

 

You Go Boy!!! Now that's what sista's like myself love to hear.... go head now...

~smile'n~

8th!

 

thanks, y'all...

too many sistahs out there think we're not watching...but we be scoping it all. we see. we feel. we make a move. sometimes it's rejected but we're always there.

reaching out.

peace.

 

baller

never stop reaching! This is beautiful.

T

 

o yea!!

tell it like it t-i is son!!!

diggin this piece fully!!

*warming my shivering heart*