Black Poetry : I See Right Through You

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Wisdom7, Aug 24, 2005.

  1. Wisdom7

    Wisdom7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Watching from your window
    Afraid to take a step out
    God forbid someone see the real u
    Others may have doubt
    So you continuosly sneak up on me
    Stalking me like prey
    Just because I am kind
    Weak is what you say
    For everything I do
    Some reason u despise
    U hide behind and innocent smile
    And roll deceitful eyes
    You innocently seem to point out my flaws
    In hopes to tear me down
    U gather a mob with all your lies
    And hope you win a crown
    I notice you change your appearance
    Insanity is your peak
    Thinking that your hiding your issues
    When attention is what you seek
    I've never done a thing to you
    Yet my existence makes u groan
    B---tch go get some self esteem
    And leave me the f---ck alone!
     
  2. Tha-Emissary

    Tha-Emissary Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I think you need to give this dog a bone. A bone upside the head that is. I like your flow.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    word up a true smack down i may add
    tyte write
     
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    mzpoetic8705 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol....this was funny (is that a bad thing)...but i enjoyed it
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sometime you just have to pray...but as I tell ppl that person may have not got that way alone....nice drop
     
  6. Wisdom7

    Wisdom7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks guys for your comments! Sometimes u get tired of staying peaceful and ignoring someone :slobber: :dance3: or being the bigger person. People mistake your kind ness as a weakness and that just felt so good to get it out! :dance3:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You do have those who put others down simply to build themselves up. And yes, they do need to get a life and stay out of yours. Enjoyed the "in ya face" style.
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Conflict is the shiz-nit!

    YOU got it!
     
  9. moham

    moham Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was some straight wisdom.... :wink:

    :sand: moham
     
  10. Earftones

    Earftones Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wassup Wisdom
    Looooved it
    Peace
     
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