Black Poetry : I Searched For A Woman (Black Woman)

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  1. klabarron

    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I searched for a Woman
    To give me Daughters and bare me Sons
    A generational woman - Carrier of my seed
    lover of my soul
    mother to my earthly existence
    and all I got was
    girl
    girl girl and
    girl girl girl.

    With boyish accretion
    girl
    girl girl and
    girl girl girl.
    became lesions upon my blister az$
    as I chased my future into my past
    and committed with genocidal glee
    suicidal act after
    suicidal act
    upon backs both mine
    and beauty black
    raping my sisters of virgin heritage
    washing upon the shores of womanhood
    the bodies of captive slaves
    corpses of copulation
    victimization
    and black-queen- splotiation
    cause with penal elation
    I conjured smiles upon
    faces for all the wrong reasons
    as girl
    girl girl
    and girl girl girl
    sought a Man, an African King
    only gaining the their souls penetration
    by a boy who penally perpetrated as a man.

    I searched for a Woman
    not being a man at all
    not realizing that being blessed with a Woman
    required first being a Man.
    Fully man
    with accountability to God
    and responsibility to Man
    Not living life with a lustful plan
    to exploit or contort or resort
    to defining Manhood
    by multiple penetrations
    black queen subjugation
    and penal prowess’s libations.
    Drinking the strong drink
    of selfishness and greed and
    killing women in saintly seed
    preventing a pure thicket of natural forest lands
    from ever becoming
    what Jah had planned
    because I was coming
    dripping seeds of life
    causing the death
    of future possibilities
    lost potential
    and frustration for years to come.

    I searched for a Woman
    nor realizing – I was yet to become a Man.
    Wasting black seed
    black time
    and spilling commerce from these black hand
    for I wasted life on lucidity
    the lunacy of the fool in me
    and time, season of this life
    never to be recaptured
    for the minute were gone in
    3 minute songs
    5 times and day
    7 days a week
    futility vs. utility
    as money that could have enhanced life
    de-pantsed life
    and every conjugal
    had a price tag paid
    for a foolish lay
    to play
    f&^k and frolic
    as a boy believing the life of manhood
    when manhood
    turned to fatherhood
    and responsibly should
    self-restraint would
    and child support could
    be paid by a boy,
    penis in hand
    seeking a Woman
    Perpetrating as a Man
    with my seeds fate in my hands.
    And I am still looking….
    Because before I can find Womanhood in another
    I must first become the Man in me.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    be all u are and what u are
    a man the man thee man
    indeed u are who u are within
    love dis one
     
  3. klabarron

    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thought provoking reply Rich. thanks.
     
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    I am THOROUGHLY enjoying you my brotha...:grouphug:
    This was just :smokin: :hot: :)
    wow
     
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    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks so much for the read triniti!!!
     
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    nice drop
    clearly n loud
    flow on
    :angel1:
     
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    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thx mzblk. you are truly and ANGEL.
    K


     
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    Never too old to learn and grow, that's more than some ever know. Powerfully laid.
     
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    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks my sis! much love and flowetry!!
    k

     
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    Now this is Great Poetry

    whoa...

    your work just blows me away...

    hair just waving in the wind of it...

    I'm always left redefining poetry,

    after reading you...
     
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