Black Poetry : I say what i feel so......

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  1. LovNThySoul

    LovNThySoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is my expression of me as most poetry is of the author. Just my emotional ventilation resulting from emotional constipation. If this appears negative it isn't. Just a realization of my reality.



    The love in thy soul

    How can you deny the love in thy soul
    when you showed me your yearning as if this was your goal

    Push away my heart as if love was not worth your time
    You couldn't stand to be apart, led me on with fabricated lines

    Was i naieve to believe in you, believe in your feelings for me
    was it true, or were your lies more real that only you could see

    I have followed the love in thy soul only for it to lead to pain
    And now i must avoid what i have sought due to only wanting in vain

    I thought once upon a brotha's day that my mindset was definitely wanted
    Yet now i know among all the rest that my love within isn't really counted

    Judged from the start, then sadness within my heart do i go on with my life's role
    So now i live apart, from that which lies within from the start, of the love that still dwells in thy soul
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    the soul holds the gold of love
    really like how u vent this out to canvas
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i like how you laid this...nice write

    PEace
    Angel
     
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    love the artistry of your pen nice flow, flow on poet:hearts4:
     
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    LovNThySoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for the positive responses. My skin is thick so good or bad....thanks.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    most welcome ......continue to express
     
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    This was painfully real...Thanx 4 sharing!...

    Peace!
     
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    Hi LovNThySoul
    Tight poem
    and it's not negative
    I enjoy how you flows
    your thoughts of love
    and your given
    and how as i read on
    relating your reaction
    of his action
    YET
    your strenght grew
    Just a realization of my reality.
    and still within these lines
    a decision
    Judged from the start, then sadness within my heart do i go on with my life's role

    Very cool poem poet

    Peace
     
  9. LovNThySoul

    LovNThySoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks all for the positive remarks. I'm kinda surprised by them. My poems are a deep window into who i am as a person so i feel kinda....well...

    butt nekkid in a room full of pitbulls with pork chop draws on. LOL


    I only have 2 poems on here (this one included). I tend to "pop" these out when i'm in deep thought. I don't want to flood the market so to speak with my jumbled thoughts so i am trying to put ones that i feel go here. Hope that makes sense.
     
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    true dat indeed , and know your not nekked but ready
    to be embraced in this poetic place so flow as u feel
    all make sense .......................................................
     
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