Quiet Poetry Lounge : I roll alone

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by caramelpython, Nov 16, 2003.

  1. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I roll alone, lest my woman
    at my side, don't have many friends
    seems like I ain't got the bling bling
    to reel'em in.
    What they don't realize is..I'm
    richer than they'll ever be.
    See I got my woman who stands by me.
    She's a thick honey brown shawty with
    tenacity and spunk, she calls me her
    Nubian hunk.
    She's intelligent and smooth, classy, sexy.
    But that woman can get nasty.
    She builds me up when I'm down, makes
    her man look up from the ground.
    See I got what all men want, that one
    woman that stands through heat and cold
    calls out her King makes his world
    unfold.
    She's sweet like nothing man made
    everytime she moves it's a sweet tasty parade.
    I stand at her side giving her strength
    for you see I understand, she, sometimes,
    just like me needs too be held, needs too
    be heard, needs her tears dried, thats why
    by her side I'll always stand.
    See I got a woman that stands by me.
    So I know I'm richer than those so called
    friends will ever be.
    I roll alone lest my woman at my side.
    God sent this vision of beauty too me.

    And....Ooooh by the way her name is "POETRY"!

    Caramelpython 11/2003
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i like this drop...
    a richer man is with love of himself
    within is the greater of all..and last time i look
    bling bling dont make a man anyway...
    so do your thang..
    :angel1:
     
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    blink blink waste of funds
    that can be stolen or lost

    to have a soul
    who warms you when it cold

    is so much real
    then the materails deals

    poetry will always be

    a loving ear
    that will hold you dear

    wonderful
    Peace
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nice scribe rollin
    u drop a master piece
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Bling bling can't buy talent, and you've got that to spare. very nice.
     
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    Hiclass_female Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tight work
    keep it coming!
     
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    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    every time you drop a piece my jaw drops in awe. this was so tyte. wishing my name was poetry.
     
  8. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ty ty all your words and support have been a blessing.
    Randee congradulations on being poet of the week.
    watzinaname you honor me
    Hiclass_female I will try..lol
    $$RICH$$ i'm almort ready
    Bluewater as long as I have "her" I will feel rich
    mzblkangel you know my sister it is never all about $$$$
     
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