Black Poetry : I remember

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by iwannabe, Aug 24, 2005.

  1. iwannabe

    iwannabe Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Making love to you was too good to believe.
    Sexual bliss beyond my hottest dreams,
    Bodily pleasure enough to make you cream.
    Sensations in me took all strength from my knees
    But inspired with desire
    I proceeded to take you higher, and higher.
    Your guide to the peak, the prime of your sexual needs.
    Hands gripping your hips tightly,
    I'm feeling like this might be
    Heaven on earth,
    Or the rebirth
    Of the definition of pleasure as I previously knew.
    The feel of your skin on mine is more than divine
    And I feel so close to you.
    As all things do, this feeling will end
    But I don't want it to.
    Even though I lead you closer to climax,
    I hope this moment exists forever in time.
    Or at least for an eternity in mind,
    I want to remember how you were mine
    And how I
    Leaned over and left wet kisses on the nape of your neck,
    As I loved you slowly, deeply from the back…
    How you screamed my name,
    Whimpered because of pleasure so insane
    It bordered pain.
    I hope I wont forget how your body trembled
    And you cried out as you came.
    How I couldn't contain
    Myself as I came too.
    I never want to forget because every second of this sex
    Was fantasy come true.

    :jawdrop:
    Ade again- holla at me
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  2. Tha-Emissary

    Tha-Emissary Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "I hope this moment exists forever in time.
    Or at least for an eternity in mind,
    I want to remember how you were mine."
    All I can say is Woo Wee! God Lawd that's a line
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nice flow indeed
     
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    Such a sensual feeling when two connect this way, lovingly. I enjoyed this piece poet.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    still feeling the beauty inside this joint !!!
     
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    somebody call the fire dept i'm on fire
     
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