Black Poetry : I remember...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by LibertyLady, May 10, 2003.

  1. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I remebered those day,s lord....
    when mother earth and i caught youre
    attention...when i start singin and the
    birds joined us...
    Those days when you made beautifull
    paintings in the sky.........
    ......and how you would take my hand
    and how we would run into the fields..
    I remembered those days lord...when i
    was close to you and how you held me
    under youre arm...you showed me funny things
    and we laught together.....
    those where the days when i was happy..

    I remember....
    I Remember..
    I REMEMBER!!!...

    Thank you LORd...


    that i remember..
     
  2. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Cindy Cindy. ...much love to ya too..i just want to say....i wrote alot last two weeks so most of the time i was only posting them i,m done with al the posting...i will come back to all ya beautifull poets and scribes and i will respond on you poets.....i dont have and own computer...not yet..
     
  3. kaly

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    I remember those days
    those happy peaceful days
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    remembering so well
    thanks for taking me back to
    these beautiful days
     
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    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I loved what this poem conjured up
    in my own set of memories.
    You penned them so well.
    Peace
     
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    lpoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Those days when you made beautifull
    paintings in the sky.........


    nice lines

    memoris are great

    keep bring that fire.....
     
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    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    remembering it's almost as good as experiencing nice flow peace and blessins keep flowin
     
  8. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Khaly, Rich,Skrybe7,lpoet,Serenti poet,,,,beautifull poets..
    thanks...
    stay close to god....
     
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    Man I'm just grateful that you wrote this :heart: :)
     
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    libertylaida

    I like this very much, nice!
     
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