Black Poetry : I recall her name

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by HODEE, Jul 30, 2004.

  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You are my cherished colorful creation, dream of being real.
    It's laughable, but you.
    You really make me feel.

    Alive.

    You are my heart, hurt,what a heaven creation you are.
    Your my everything, eternal, eloquent emerald.

    You became the rage, the rational reason to continue.
    Internal always within my soul.

    Everyday.

    Everywhere.

    Any time any place.
    I'm thinking of you now.

    I'll meet you.

    You just don't know I exist.
    But then you do.
    Because you were sitting beside me.
    Because I spent time with you.

    C my love is beating on the horizon, it is glowing in every moon beam.
    It is in every rain drop, and chirp of a bird.

    When you look at anything beautiful.
    I know you think of me.
    Because I think of you all the time.

    Live long, forever my love.
    I know your forever with me. :love:
     
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My, my don't we have a soft side....
    what a wonderful thing to feel that way about someone, what a lucky girl. Very nice poem and I'm so glad you decided to share a part of your life.
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    heyyyyy Hodee this was tight, smooth too i am liking this vibe!!!!
    peace...Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    feeling da soft depth of ya pen here brutha very well pose'd
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hodee, this was so beautiful, it made me smile. Very lovely piece.
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hodee, this was so sweet:):):) tight flow


    :heart:
     
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