Black Poetry : I realized!!

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  1. rico love

    rico love Member MEMBER

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    I sit here and realize how strong I've become,
    with such confidence I feel that I finally found that one.
    This feeling is so strong I'm powerful when she's present.
    It feels like a day of Christmas after opening my first present,
    The joy that she brings is the most wonderful thing,
    It's like December and April or Christmas in Spring,
    I Love my royal Queen, my soul she uplifts,
    and she LOVES me back, for me that's the greatest gift.
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Great closure again. Great flow too.
    All of your content is good, it's always in a closure you sew it up for the reader.

     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Great way to express it and show the world
     
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