Black Poetry : I Read Her My Poetry

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  1. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    She asked me to tell her something
    about love
    that I had told no other
    before…so I thought…

    I’d read her a line of my poetry

    I read of how my desires were born
    from surreptitious thoughts of lovely
    passion-filled dreams that I just can’t
    help but to act out with her…then…

    I read her
    another
    line or two
    of my poetry

    Reciting verbally with the gift I
    was blessed with, I spoke on every
    single kiss I’ve kissed in my lifetime
    that couldn’t quantify with the very first
    one I placed gently upon her lips…after which

    I read her
    a few more lines
    of my poetry

    I eloquently articulated
    that she was
    the muse of my muse
    when it comes to
    creating these
    love jones type of mental vibes
    because I always think
    of her when I scribe
    my love-filled scribes
    from deep within me…
    where she enjoys
    our comfortable lover’s sojourn…

    and subsequently…

    I revealed
    in simply a whisper
    that all the lines of my poetry
    that I had just read to her
    were written on my heart;
    and this I’ve told no other...

    ©GQINC2K3
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    READ her poetry
    words yet not heard
    a lovin way to start da day
    intently she listen to what GQ say

    man dis was ringing loud round da room
    all da ladies wanna know what it was

    just keep reading her poetry !

    TYGHT scribe Q
     
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    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Man you bringing out the big guns!!!
     
  4. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GQ..

    the love you have for your lady must be extraordinarily special...
    it shines through in all of your words....and they are simply beautiful!!!

    K
     
  5. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Y'all ain't playing fair!

    Another one huh! You just rollin em out like Big mama's rolls...



    Blessings On Ya House!
     
  6. MsDLite

    MsDLite Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    verb absorption...
     
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