Black Poetry : I Rather.....

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Imagination
    Indulges
    Of a dream within the…………

    Vision the insight of us……WE
    Intertwine in loves passion
    Across the moon within the starz…
    I rather be with YOU..

    Playing in reality
    Making dreams come true..
    Turning my life upside down
    As you made my life complete
    No where else I rather be then with YOU..

    Like a hazy shade of madness
    Possess………. me in my soul
    P-o-s-s-e-s-s
    Me with all of you
    Love me crazy
    Allow me to lose it in YOUR heaven
    In a lazy summer day as we become……ONE
    So unclearly and never try to define
    The reason of ..you….I…..us…into……WE
    Take my love to no return
    See I rather be with YOU…

    Always bring me to reality
    Smoothes my soul and calms my spirit
    Everyday is my lucky day
    As your love brings new meaning in my life
    I rather be with you

    Irreplaceable you are
    Nothing compares to the love you give
    Its
    Real
    Raw
    Amazing
    Crazy
    Passionate
    Untamable
    In - creditable
    Strength
    Soul of my Soul
    My love
    My everything….

    See, I rather be with YOU

    Imagination
    Indulges
    Of a dream within the…………
    REALITY OF US

    (C) 2004
    Poetry by an Angel

     
  2. lilcherry76

    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you did ya thang on this one, mzblkangel never ceases to amaze me, except this time, you surpassed the word amazing, and went straight to all out awe........... :coffee:
     
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    mmmmmm i see :look: gurllll he got it like THAT! ;)
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Triniti...

    you ain't know? :wink: :lol:

    This piece is beautifully posed.

    :thanks: for sharing your thoughts with us.

    :toast:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very tyte drop dis was off da hook whewwwwwwwwwww!!
     
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    Imagination is great, but there is nothing like the real deal. Well done.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the love famblee
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    love me crazy...... i'm lovin dis one
     
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    Oh yes I am .............................



    :read: :read: :read: :read: :read: :read: :read: :read: :read: :read:


    And I must say it is.........................


    :court: :court: :court: :court: :court: :court: :court: :court:


    So so so so so so ...........................

    :driveby: :driveby: :driveby: :driveby: :driveby: :driveby: :driveby:


    that I had to................................

    :read: :rolleyes: :read: :roll: :read: :eek:hmy: :read: :kiss:


    Keep doing ya thing angel.
     
  10. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks daroc and Python
    for the love and support....Angel
     
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