Black Poetry : I Ran From Love

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  1. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    I ran
    away from my past
    history

    my neighborhood
    where i used to be
    trying to get free
    not knowing what
    it meant to be free

    I ran from my
    past history a
    husband or two to be
    throwing away
    the master key they held
    for me

    with all my heart
    and soul i want
    control didn't want
    them to get the best
    of me

    you see starting out
    on my own two feet
    wouldn't allow me to
    lose sight of me

    giving myself a chance to
    establish my own identity

    I ran from love








    lana1287 productions :heart:
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    PD....i feel ya here we sometime run to fine self
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    sometimes you have to handle your business
    and choices have to be made

    feeling you all the way
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  4. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    Thank You DSS and Rich

    you know the deal ;)

    pd

    :toast:
     
  5. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey poet i saw this piece earlyer here, i havent got the time to respond
    because i was typing my poem and somethimes it goes really slow!lol
    but i wanted you to know that i feld youre poem

    Dont run oke......
     
  6. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    i'm a rebel without a cause

    it feels good actually now that i've gotten that off of my chest :)

    peace

    poeticd ;)
     
  7. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    and while you were running, your shadow was chasing you...

    I like the way you put this pd....

    K
     
  8. jerseyy22

    jerseyy22 Member MEMBER

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    I'm feeling it

    I really like this..you were right our poems are chapters frm the same book....i'll bee looking out for more of your stuff
     
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    UPTOWNE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    RUN FOREST RUN!
     
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    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sweet piece pd.
     
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