Black Poetry : I Quit...

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  1. coey30

    coey30 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    They say if they only knew
    So I’m crying out, crying out to you
    I’m trying to hold on
    But I’m getting weak
    I find it hard to talk about
    I just want to sleep
    Sleep to where I never wake
    This pain is too much to take
    I can no longer mask the heartache
    These meds I take don’t help me get by
    I have unanswered questions
    A pack of whys
    These tears leave tracks on my face
    I need to find peace, a peaceful place
    I try to breathe slow and let go
    But I just don’t care no more
    I just want to let it all go
    End my life smooth and slow
    I just fade to black
    I sick of the struggles
    Sick of feeling I’m under attack
    This time im going to get it right
    Kill this flame, blow out the light
    I ready to move on and feel no pain
    I need peace in my life
    Or make the attempts to end this life again.
     
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    Law of Amen
    You were made in the likeness of a peace that nothing can disturb.
    Reclaim your peace that you may attain to your reason for coming into existence –
    the enjoyment of life.​
     
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    Law of Ausar
    Your nature is an unconquerable peace, therefore nothing or no one in the world can be against you.
    All experiences come to you to promote your reclamation of peace, that you may in turn, aquire wisdom and power.​
     
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    as a general rule its easier to read a few books than to kill yourself.......
     
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    ill try that.
     
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    Peace coey30,

    sometimes words.. in their own quest for status.. for symmetry.. for logic.. for importance.. inadvertently conspire to destroy the host that makes them possible.
    and it's for that reason, we must always recognize that words are man's invention.. and as such.. are imperfect.. and not to be trusted beyond a certain point.

    your existence here and now is the result of your people persisting through all the trials and tribulations of their times.. dating back to the very beginning of time..
    and any word-logic-loops that would seek to justify voluntarily throwing that away.. must be labeled as defective and thus disregarded.

    in my own time of trouble.. I put words away.. and look to sound.. to music.. to Miles.. to Coltrane.. To Monk.. I look to painting.. to dance.. to nature.. to God.
    and invariably, things become clear.

    peace again.
     
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    coey30 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you for your words. It brought me too a better place. Just watching the news and seeing others struggles lets me know that mines are not that bad.
     
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