Black Poetry : I put the sweat on his brow!

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  1. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I had to throw the brother a towel.
    After his post coitus howl.
    Thought I heard the wolf growl.
    And you looking at me as if to say ,
    "HOW?"
    I put the sweat on his brow.

    Blessed with legendary skills.
    My simple verbals give you the chills.
    As your love potion you spill.
    You got to swallow this pill.
    I'm at the top of it now...
    As I wipe the sweat...
    I put on your brow.

    Gasping , panting breaths as you
    laugh and reach, glad you waited
    for this ARKANSAS PEACH!
    So close but still out of reach.
    Worth the wait, oh what memorable feats.
    Sweets to the sweet and now...
    I put the sweat on his brow.

    Touching your soul not just your body.
    If you had your doubts ,now you know
    I am none to shoddy.
    As I smooth your mustache and kiss
    your nose.
    I watch the curling of your toes.
    All you could mutter was "BABY WOW!"
    As I wipe the sweat..
    I put on his brow!

    BJS(C)2003 :look:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes indeed u laid it down
    what a smile to a face
    from the love u just gave
    tyte scribe let him know ..
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol :laugh: you made is toes curls ....nice one sis...keep those towels near by...
    Happy New Year
    Peace
    Blue :heart:
     
  4. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hahahaha! Yeah you know the deal!

    Thanks for reading and responding.
    You know I had to do something light for the season...
    Passion is my middle name after all!

    Blessings On Your House!
     
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    thespokesman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the boy feels u know
    trust me
    i really know what u talking bout
    tyte flow
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You have a warmth to most of your scribes...this one is no different.
     
  7. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i missed this....
    man cold meds aint
    no joke....lol
    i likes this vibe....
    as always you lay it down
    tight drop.....Angel
     
  8. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks so much for reading and responding!

    Now you know I am indeed a warm and passionate soul.
    A lover not a fighter (unless I need to ) LOL! Seriously I
    love what I do here this is really my playground and You
    all are somewhat my playmates (NOOOOOOOOOO!) not in
    the carnal sense...You know what I mean!

    Blessings On Your House! :thanks:
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    SisterGirl...I meant to hit this up earlier...
    Loved every part of it...
    you always bring us something good!
    Expectations Exceeded, Once again!
     
  10. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Angelic Sage!

    This was fun to do..

    BLESSINGS ON YOUR HOUSE!
     
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