Black Poetry : I Promise

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  1. Aaliyahmonay

    Aaliyahmonay Member MEMBER

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    I promise to treat u better with respect,
    2 show u that i care,
    About u,
    I luv u boo,
    U're my heart and my soul,
    I wouldn't wanna let u go,
    I'll wipe the tears from yo sad face,
    That no one can eva replace,
    I promise to luv u,
    And only u,
    My sweet honeydew,
    2 stand by yo side,
    U got dignity and pride,
    U'll alwayz have a home,
    2 come 2,
    When you're lonely,
    Or sad,
    U can come to me,
    My luv is 4 u,
    And u only,
    I promise.

    Aaliyahmonay aka: Aaliyahmonet(same person):)
     
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    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Girl!!! I'm coming HOME!!!!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    promise me dis
    sound so sweet
    now u & I
    faces we meet
    hand N' hand
    like sweet alf
    u promise me
    love wit lovin grace
    u promise me ya heart
    from the start
    u promise me
    only me to be
    in yo mind i'm
    all u see
    coz u promise me......
     
  4. Aaliyahmonay

    Aaliyahmonay Member MEMBER

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    Gracias(thankyou)

    Gracias for those replies guys.

    Aaliyahmonay

    p.s. I'm not mexican but i went to school and took 4 years of spanish.

    Adios,

    Aaliyahmonay
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    C....
     
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    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    that was a very nice flow
    that too many men never hear
    glad to see you got that kinda love in U
     
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