Black Poetry : i promise...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by baller, Apr 2, 2001.

  1. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I promise…

    To be the best man I can be
    To love you forever
    And never to leave

    I promise…

    To be there for you
    To hold you through your tears
    And always be true

    I promise…

    To support you through life’s troubles
    …share in your pains
    Of hard times and struggles

    Through sunny skies
    Laughter and smiles

    I’ll be there.

    Through wintry colds
    And partly cloudy days

    I’ll be there.

    When the bottom of your world
    Seems to fall away
    And you can’t help but hear
    Negativity
    The world sends your way

    When God looks down
    And gently say,
    “No, my child
    You can’t have that today”

    I’ll be there for you
    Deep in my heart
    You may lay

    I’ll grant you a smile
    At the start of each day
    Before we lay down
    I’ll love you YOUR way

    Nevermore will arguments
    Consume your EVERYDAY
    But happy thoughts
    And smiles
    And loving words
    O’kay…

    We’ll take evening walks
    Along the river of life
    I’ll fall down on bended knees
    Asking you to be my wife

    When your days are overcome
    By clouds and rain
    I’ll step to you, lovingly
    Yes, I’ll make it better
    …again.

    Together,
    We will greet
    The numerous tomorrows
    Wake up happy times
    ...lay to rest
    The sorrows

    I promise…

    To be the best man I can be
    To love you forever
    And never to leave

    I promise.
     
  2. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Baller, brotha, brotha, brotha. You just don't know or do you. I needed this this morning. After 10 years, sometime I take for granted the loving hubby I have. I just called him at work and told him I love him and thank you. He wasn't surprised by the I love you. He did ask thank you for what though. To make a long story short I thanked him for:

    "When your days are overcome
    By clouds and rain
    I’ll step to you, lovingly
    Yes, I’ll make it better
    …again."

    Perfection as usual. I am truly home
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    BALLER MAN YA ON POINT
    THE GREATEST LOVE IS THE LOVE U POSE
    SHO YA LOVE MAN ......FLOW ON!
     
  4. diva08

    diva08 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i don't make promises
    but i'd promise
    that your every wish
    would be my command after that

    d
     
  5. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Simply Baller beautiful!
    A truly enjoyable read.


    Scribeaboutit! It helps.
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
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    misty Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thats love.... Sweet
    :love: :)
     
  7. Natasha

    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Simply.............. beautiful

    makes me want to say "I love you"
    Natasha :heart:
     
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