Black Poetry : I pray for you

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Here we go again
    What you do when ya past come back
    And hurts you in a form of a lie
    You were a friend thought I could trust
    Should of known it was a bittersweet lie of a love
    But I gave you a chance
    And you made your choose
    Now…
    Here we go again
    See the thing is I got past you
    Moved on and doing good

    Dayum
    Here we go again
    See I was there as a friend when things was going wrong
    Talked to all through the night…when you couldn’t sleep
    Now you come stab me in the back with a lie
    I took your side even when I saw you provoking the situation
    I pray for you….
    Here we go again

    What do you do when nothing seems real
    …..anymore
    Why can’t this past just go away?
    I moved on…why can’t you
    What was done was done
    We weren’t meant to be
    I am finally happy
    Here we go again…
    The pain u caused me
    The all night crying
    God’s mercy kept me
    I pray for you

    Yes, you came back
    Not once but twice
    Talking you wanna try and be friends
    That you know it is damage
    But…we can make it
    Because you love me
    Will you forgive you….dayum
    It is too late…I don’t love you
    And don’t want you
    But…
    I pray for you

    (C) 2005
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Express yourself...and keep it real. I feel the passion in this piece. Let it out....don't bottle it up...and you'll have eternal peace.

    :thanks: for sharing your work with us.

    :toast:
     
  3. nevar

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    love your poem flow on poet.:hearts2:
     
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    Praying for me
    Im praying for you
    You just let love slip out of your finger tips boo
    I came back twice thinking of you
    It took but once for you to leave me too
    Now im fighting demons I never seen
    I lost my best friend-I thought of you like that
    Did you know I thought of you like that
    How can I move on
    When heart is in your hands
    How can I forget when you were my everything
    I used to walk you to the store when we first meet
    I took you to your first interview-You remember that boo
    Move on I still wanted you to move in
    I still consider you my dearist friend
    I love you
    Please forgive me
    I need you hear
    Pray for me!!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I believe that the truth always comes out in the end. Sometimes we just have to give it up to the Lord. Well posed piece.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    often it arise da lie and suprise
    but at the end truth will mend
    i feel you here sis.................
     
  7. Bluewater

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    Hi Sista Angel
    You lay this out
    I as well love
    how you express your feeling
    in this poem

    Much Love
    Peace
     
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    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :bowdown: Lay it out my sister..I'm feeling your vibe and deep flow of emotion twards the conflict.....
     
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    I'm feelin this piece, Angel...Thanx 4 sharing...

    Peace!
     
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    Mz Angel

    AS YOU ARE FOND OF SAYING..

    No weapons of evil shall prosper over you.
    False rumor, lies and innuendo
    all will be exposed and crushed in the end.

    Ashes to ashes and dust to dust.

    Those you trust who turn against you,
    others shall turn on them in turn.

    Just do what you do in the right spirit.
    Truth shall reveal itself.

    Peace & many Blessings!
    One Love,
    Brother Omowale.
     
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