Black Poetry : I Pledge Allegiance (Triple Haiku)

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  1. Nia Maishani

    Nia Maishani Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    to my Ancestors
    Who crossed the Middle Passage
    and to the Kingdoms

    of Alkebulan
    One unabashed Nubian,
    vessel of Goddess

    Inseparable
    From my dispersed family
    of Melanin bond.
     
  2. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nia

    Oh how terrific is this "photo" haiku that you have painted! Brilliant sistah, just plain brilliant!!

    N2
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well now three x da fun

    beautifully sprayed and well done.....:D
     
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    there's a touch of class in the way you have woven these haiku's together to tell a beautiful story....

    K
     
  5. Nia Maishani

    Nia Maishani Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you much.....

    To my dear three kinfolk, for your much appreciated accolades.

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    Kitana:heart:

    Looking forward to playing to win next week, N2!
     
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    crafted superbly, i'm diggin' you with these haiku skiznills..

    you represented on this one.

    peace be
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    J said it best... Superbly crafted!

    Madd Love
    Reas
     
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    Your skills are

    awesome, sista!

    Thank you for this triple-decked scribe!

    SWT
     
  9. Nia Maishani

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    j'hiah:heart:
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    ShadeeLadee:heart:

    It warms my heart to know that you appreciate this piece. MY version of the "Pledge of Allegiance".
     
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    Nia.....

    I felt such strength
    and honor after reading this
    so reverently done!....5 :spinstar:


    Epiphany :heart:
     
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