Black Poetry : I Pictured Da Storm

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Last late night
    sweepin' cross trees & plains
    the skies rumbled in silent
    bright light flash
    of thunderious boomz

    As i feel da cold water lapping
    around my body
    waves breaking ova my face
    i imagine u coming 2 share with me
    the elemental delights of nature

    how beautiful da moment was
    as da storm crash my soul
    pictured in a mysterious twist
    windwril of deep deep bluish gray
    into de eyez of it all i saw u standing
    before me like a driven woodsand
    absorbed in silent caresses
    i felt da joy
    as we sat side by side
    hand N' hand
    at da opera like never before
    we listen to da storm in tragic / saga
    of tristan and isolde with souls
    so devine and free as it whispers
    our minds entwine in da zone
    of stormy bliss

    oh ' lovely aircastles form
    before our eyes in da deep
    depth of skies
    soundly i speaketh upon u
    ever so difficult to say how much
    I love u within yet true how my
    body blood stream runneth in u
    as i yearn and burn in great passion
    my soul roams the storm
    the present i hunger
    in da past i desire

    Only GOD can describe what sort of love
    we bond in da mist of rain N' pain
    inside my roots of vision at heart
    i picture the stormy love of us
    now
    kiss:kiss:
    me...!:heart:
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$
    watch out now...
    this is nice brother keep it flowin'

    blak
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thankz verb

    man i be movin in da brain storm :D
     
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    $$$RICH$$$,

    you know them there storms be causing some tight symphonies...

    this i like poet of da year...

    thought i didn't see dat huh?
     
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    MR. D

    just can't get nothing pass u ........big thankz my brutha :D
     
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    see inside her beauty is a haze of storm untold
    and many faces un spoken of now i rest my case.:eek:
     
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    O' my Cindy

    i'm amazed how u feel me so ......ya my chick 4 sho
    nuff said .....:heart: :kiss:
     
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    Beautiful thought here...

    In the storm.....um um umh....treasure the moment...
    Love is...
    Eternal:heart:
     
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    eternal

    love is a storm of bliss in every moment
    thankz for da read:D :toast:
     
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    hand in hand at da opera like never before
    we listen to da storm in tragic/ saga of tristan....


    that line's killin' it maan..

    in the midst of the storm there is calm that she brings....
    jh.
     
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