Black Poetry : I....painted...a......dream.......

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  1. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ummmm!!
    so beautiful
    as i step in ya dream
    this was awesome scribing sistah Trin
    wow!
    it took me somewhere and back
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow...gurllllllll
    this was a lovely
    painted dream...
    i can get with a
    dream like this:lol:
    tight drop
    flow on.....
    peace
    Angel
     
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    this is extemely hot my sexy queen....my goodness
    i shall be back once i've gotten my composure to return...whoa *in a daze*
    one love
    khasm
     
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    oh my sister..this flow
    is so devine:)
    wonderful, beautiful..wow
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    dang!!!!!!!!!
    Tha bomb sho nuff blew up on this one.....totally speechless
     
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    not only that, you painted a classic.
    your imagery and style in this one
    gave my mind that whip appeal girl...

    *whoa*
    jh.
     
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    Wow....you painted a pure masterpiece here. I particularly loved these lines:
    I stepped into the center of my entity
    and I…painted a dream
    dipping my brush in the power of a
    someday….
    But this was beautiful all the way through. :bowdown:
     
  9. Alpha Male

    Alpha Male Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Re: TO triniti424

    TRINITY'S POEM IS SIMPLY GREAT
    THE POET HALL OF FAME WILL BE YOUR FATE
    FLOWING LIKE A WARM BREEZE
    READING IT MAKES ME WANT TO KNOW THEE



     
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    Funny sis but I had a dream yesterday that you had written another piece again, cause it's been a minute. And looky! You done did it, and as usual, it is off the chain and then some. Many props, girl, many props for this.
     
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