Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by triniti424, Mar 1, 2004.
as i step in ya dream
this was awesome scribing sistah Trin
it took me somewhere and back
this was a lovely
i can get with a
dream like this
this is extemely hot my sexy queen....my goodness
i shall be back once i've gotten my composure to return...whoa *in a daze*
oh my sister..this flow
is so devine
Tha bomb sho nuff blew up on this one.....totally speechless
not only that, you painted a classic.
your imagery and style in this one
gave my mind that whip appeal girl...
Wow....you painted a pure masterpiece here. I particularly loved these lines:
I stepped into the center of my entity
and I…painted a dream
dipping my brush in the power of a
But this was beautiful all the way through.
Re: TO triniti424
TRINITY'S POEM IS SIMPLY GREAT
THE POET HALL OF FAME WILL BE YOUR FATE
FLOWING LIKE A WARM BREEZE
READING IT MAKES ME WANT TO KNOW THEE
Funny sis but I had a dream yesterday that you had written another piece again, cause it's been a minute. And looky! You done did it, and as usual, it is off the chain and then some. Many props, girl, many props for this.
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