Black Poetry : I only wanted a kiss....

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by story, Aug 20, 2002.

  1. story

    story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I met this guy...on the subway last week....
    Puerto-rican mixed with dominican and sprinkled with a little Jamaican...

    We,
    exchanged numbers and the next day...talked for hours...
    we,
    talked about goals...hopes...dreams...and, reality...
    he,
    talked about sex...and how he wondered what it would feel like to be in my center...
    I,
    wondered....where did that come from...can I get to know you first bruh?
    he,
    proceeded to ask if he could tell me a bedtime story...lol...he was fascinated with the fact that my Name is story...
    I said sure....
    I was getting tired anyway....
    He,
    surprised me again,
    with an erotic tale....but....funny thing happened....it got me d-r-y
    only thing that leaked with moisture was a tear from my e-y-e
    later on that night...after he was gone...
    I wondered w-h-y...
    he couldn't just caress me mentally and then kiss me on my third eye....with his words....

    lol....
    just practicing on free-stylin y'all!
     
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    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    One must first embrace the mind, before they can embrace the body....
     
  3. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    story
    I really liked your flow,
    but one way to look at it is that at least he showed his hand up front, tasteless though it may be,
    saving you time and agony.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    hummmm!!!
    nice open style of flow
     
  5. story

    story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks guys....

    i hear ya shaz!!!
     
  6. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tyte freestyle display :toast:

    nfinite..
    jh.
     
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    loved the river's flow.

    THANKS for sharing.
     
  8. story

    story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    j, baller...thanks
     
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