Black Poetry : i notice.....

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by word2poetry, Sep 15, 2003.

  1. word2poetry

    word2poetry Member MEMBER

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    you got this shine to your eyes,
    and this tone to your voice,
    when it comes time to choose you'll be my first choice.

    cuz you got this soul to your rythm,
    and this love to your heart,
    i knew it'd be you from the very first start.

    i like that you got this caress to your hands,
    and this gentleness to your kiss,
    if i could have one wish i'd wish to kiss those lips.

    you got this care to hug,
    and this warmth to your snug,
    you got this comfort to your squeez,
    all i want to hear is you say you love me.

    i think i like the way you stare,
    and how you whisper secrets in my ear,
    i notice......
    how u got this spell over my body,
    you make my heart scream!!!!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    lay it all out
    dis was very nice i was like whoaaaaaa!!
    tyte
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i enjoyed this alot
     
  4. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    so beautiful...what a compliment in it's highest form. much love for this one.
     
  5. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    aww how cute, must be a special person. nice flow...
     
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    lovely
    feeling the gentlness
    of your flow
    Peace
     
  7. word2poetry

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    thanx alot peeps:)
     
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